Thread:Mintyfingers/@comment-39650179-20200930130540/@comment-25969438-20200930205847

(I’m splitting this into two comments so you won’t have to read so much text) Hey, that’s pretty good! It’s good to experiment with new styles. Critique wise, I would say try making his pose and face expression more exaggerated. For example, maybe have him bend over more so he’s not standing so stiff, as well as really exaggerate how angry he is by, say, opening his mouth more or have him squint more (referencing face expressions would help you). Also, I think having less lines surrounding him would better express the shakiness because sometimes “less is more”. Overall good job, you really captured the creepy aesthetic Salad Fingers has! I’ll create a Fan Art category to place this in and give you credit in the file description.